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Today marks the second day of activities organized by the Korean visitors for the children. They began by showing the children pictures of their lost fathers, followed by engaging in games. These activities created a joyful and uplifting atmosphere for both the children and youth.
This mission trip provides a valuable opportunity for the children to hear the gospel, experience transformation, and accept Jesus Christ as their Savior. However, we are facing a shortage of essential materials, such as school supplies, study chairs, and teaching computers.
We humbly ask for the support of sponsors, teachers, and parents to help us fulfill the mission of our church. Your assistance will make a significant difference in spreading the gospel and supporting these children. Thank you for your generosity and prayers.
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